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Old 04-28-2011, 12:03 PM
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Default The Crusades


They ware called to join the war, promising those who died in the endeavor would receive immediate remission of all their sins....


It took a while to finish this one, but here it is!
Armour design partially inspired by work of Chris Drysdale that can be found on http://chrisdrysdale.com/full/drysdale_earthLight.jpg. Tnx Chris

Many tnx to Veljko Popovic for his support, ideas and constructive criticism during the work on the picture.

Modeled in Modo, painted in Mudbox, surfacing&rendering in Lightwave3D, post in Photoshop-Let's all work together
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Old 05-05-2011, 10:49 PM
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I can't believe this was posted a week ago and no one has commented on it !

Great piece, the wings give it a Banksy esq appeal. I'm not sure all the lighting ties together 100% but I like the concept and the and the armour !
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Old 06-21-2011, 10:59 AM
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tnx Flipz!
Here's the characters front&back

The fractions opposing the absolute rule of Pope Maximillian VI grew stronger, and pilgrims were routinely slaughtered, sometimes by the hundreds, as they attempted to make the journey from the coastline at New Jaffa into the Holy Land. Encouraged by the new developments, in the Easter parts of the planet Sect's ware uniting and New Jihad, it seemed, was inevitable. It is then that "The Poor Knights OF Christ" ware called upon once again, to protect the pilgrims and unite the world once again, under one rule and one God....
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Old 06-24-2011, 06:41 PM
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its pretty good mate. but there are a few things that need sorting all mainly with the suit.


he needs a more dynamic pose/camera angle

the eyes are too far apart. (if he's human)

he'd find it impossible to twist his torso cos the midrif armour would intersect with this thigh armour.

he'd find it impossible to bend forward, as the abdomen plate isnt segmented.

he has no space in the suit for his knees.

the subdermal silver metal. the sections are too big. he could not bend his legs unless its like chain mail?

the heels on his boots would intersect with the back of his shin armour, making it impossible to walk.

his legs are a bit too short.

its actually pretty good. just needs tweaking

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